Dialogue Again

Right now I'm reading Cheryl Wyatt's second book, A Soldier's Family. I have to say, the best thing about this book is the dialogue. Cheryl has this really funny voice and it comes through her characters. They sound so real. The teenage son talks the way a teenager does. Anyhow, I'm loving it. This is a Love Inspired book and usually the dialogue in these book is toned down, sometimes I think it's even a little stilted. But not this book. Sooooo funny. Go Steeple Hill for upping the quality and realism of their books while still adhering to CBA standards!
As a sidenote, Cheryl's plot rocks too!

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Cheryl Wyatt said…
Wow!

Thanks for the compliment!

Javier was fun to write. I love how his storyline played out too.

Hugs,

Cheryl
March 15, 2008 at 4:31 PM
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