The Query: Sell Your Story Part 3
The consensus, I think, is that queries are tough to write, but make all the difference in garnering a request.
In my opinion, the blurb is everything. Of course make the other parts of your query polite and professional, but what sells your story is not how many contests you've won, not how long you've been writing, the classes you've taken, the theme of your story, etc.
Eventually we sell ourselves. But for first glance, it's all about the story.
So how do you go about writing a great blurb? And what should be in it?
A Plot Catalyst: This is super important. Agent Kristen Nelson did an in-depth series on this. Your blurb should start with the plot catalyst and cover what happens in the first 30-50 pages. Then you end on a hook.
The Hook: What is the danger (emotional or physical) that your character is going to face? The major decision he or she has to make?
In the words of Miss Snark, a good query contains the following formula:
Who is the protaganist?
What dilemma does he face?
How does it get resolved?
Answer each question in less than 25 words. That's the skeleton for a good query letter. It may not be your finished version, but it will give you the bone structure you need.
Another helpful post quoting Miss Snark is HERE.
What do you think of all this? How strong is your blurb? Have you been able to boil your plot down to its bare essentials? Have you studied the backs of books lately? Any advice to add? (since I'm still learning and working on this, just like you)
In my opinion, the blurb is everything. Of course make the other parts of your query polite and professional, but what sells your story is not how many contests you've won, not how long you've been writing, the classes you've taken, the theme of your story, etc.
Eventually we sell ourselves. But for first glance, it's all about the story.
So how do you go about writing a great blurb? And what should be in it?
A Plot Catalyst: This is super important. Agent Kristen Nelson did an in-depth series on this. Your blurb should start with the plot catalyst and cover what happens in the first 30-50 pages. Then you end on a hook.
The Hook: What is the danger (emotional or physical) that your character is going to face? The major decision he or she has to make?
In the words of Miss Snark, a good query contains the following formula:
Who is the protaganist?
What dilemma does he face?
How does it get resolved?
Answer each question in less than 25 words. That's the skeleton for a good query letter. It may not be your finished version, but it will give you the bone structure you need.
Another helpful post quoting Miss Snark is HERE.
What do you think of all this? How strong is your blurb? Have you been able to boil your plot down to its bare essentials? Have you studied the backs of books lately? Any advice to add? (since I'm still learning and working on this, just like you)
Comments
I hate bragging on me, but if I believe in the gift God has given me, I think of it as bragging on Him.
What do you think?
Jeanette, I kind of think you should be meaty with a sprinkling of nut! LOL But yes, I like it. I think it's cute. :-)
I think so too Linda.
Did you know I detest query writing?!?!
Thanks for this help Jessica. May I copy and paste? *grin*
And I had forgotten about your condo in the Keys. Do you ski? On Lake Surprise? Those are my ol' stomping grounds. I miss my Keys. I hope to have a summer home down there soon. I know the place I want. It will soon be up for grabs. YAY!
Thanks Nancy, but it's only stuff I'm parroting. :-) I like reading the backs of books too. I like previews too! LOL
Hi Deb, it's very challenging. You know the blurb is part of the query, right?
Natalie, conflict is so fun! :-)
Robyn, you're going to query this month? I think I might too. I have one out but I think it's time to send more. And no, I don't see. I tried, with hilarious, nose-clogging results. LOL But my husband use to be really good at it. Let me know if you buy a place! You never know, we might be able to meet sometime. :-) And since you have so much practice with six boys you can give me tips. LOL
And it's been like level 7 on my exercise bike--very hard, very intense, but I know there will be a reward.
Love this blog!
Patti
Hey Julie, the internet/blogs are great resources.
Elana, I actually haven't read that blog a lot so I'll go check out the post. Thanks for the info! One liners....they're great if you think of them before you write the book. LOL Afterwards, they're killer, at least for me. But you like queries so I guess you like one liners. :-P
Patti, I had no clue Natasha liked proposals done. That almost scares me off of querying her! LOL
Blessings,
Karen
Saw you on Elana's blog and not only do you have a fabulous name ;) I decided to follow you because you're one of the few people who suggested she just dive into Work instead of taking a break. Very coold :D
Anyhoo, so that's that.
Great post!
But all afternoon, I worked on a blurb and am finally satisfied with it.
You can find it in the archives.
Good stuff!
I'll have to remember this is the place to go back to when the time comes.
MUST
FINISH
BOOK
THanks Jessica!
Thanks Warren!
Debra, I hope you race me then! Tomorrow's post explains it all. *wink*
Linday, I remember you telling me about that class and I'm pretty sure I went looking for it. I actually don't think you're very wordy, so there!
Tabitha, it's good to be prepared though. :-)
Jess, thanks for stopping by! LOL I know, I was afraid I sounded cold so then I left another comment saying she might need a break. Heehee! I never thought my name was glamorous, but I'm beginning to see your point! LOL
Good for you Jennifer! I saw your post. Those are hard work but well worth the effort.
Eileen, I'm in awe that you can do a snowflake! I find those SO overwhelming. You should post about your experience sometime. :-)